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Tung Quoc Posted 20 years ago
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Government's April meeting: Announcing targets and capital for people to decide and supervise.
The April's socio-economic growth has remained the same as that of the first 3 months. Industrial production had fairly high production and step by step resumed the previous growth pace.However, many problems haven't been overcome: The basic construction investment capital,especially the state credit capital, has been low, the investment demand stimulation measures haven't been done strongly so the efficiency has been limited, the consumption prices and services have decreased and will be to decrease in next few month. It was the remark of the Planning and Investment minister at this meeting.
In this context:
1/Is it obligatory to write the before targets,industrial production and next few few months?Why?
2/April's socio-economic growth (1)= April socio-economic growth (2) ?If not, what is wrong? Why?
3/the previous growth pace (3) =the growth pace before (4)= the growth pace earlier? (5)If not, what is wrong? Why?
4/Do you write efficiency or effectiveness here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them?
5/Do remained and preserved have the same meaning and are they interchangeable?If not, what is the difference in meaning btw them?
6/Do you write Planning and Investment minister or Plan and Investment minister ? Why?
7/In state credit capital, is state an uncountable noun?
8/Do you write it was the remark or it were the remarks here?
9/ Is limited an adjectif or a verb used in the passive?
10/Do you write The basic construction investment capital or The basic constructional investment capiatal ? Why?What is the difference btw them?
12/ Is there comma after so?
Thanks
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Government's April meeting: Announcing targets and capital for people to decide and supervise.
The April's socio-economic growth has remained the same as that of the first 3 months. Industrial production had fairly high production and step by step resumed the previous growth pace.However, many problems haven't been overcome: The basic construction investment capital,especially the state credit capital, has been low, the investment demand stimulation measures haven't been done strongly so the efficiency has been limited, the consumption prices and services have decreased and will be to decrease in next few month. It was the remark of the Planning and Investment minister at this meeting.
In this context:
1/Is it obligatory to write the before targets,industrial production and next few few months?Why?
2/April's socio-economic growth (1)= April socio-economic growth (2) ?If not, what is wrong? Why?
3/the previous growth pace (3) =the growth pace before (4)= the growth pace earlier? (5)If not, what is wrong? Why?
4/Do you write efficiency or effectiveness here? Why?What is the difference in meaning btw them?
5/Do remained and preserved have the same meaning and are they interchangeable?If not, what is the difference in meaning btw them?
6/Do you write Planning and Investment minister or Plan and Investment minister ? Why?
7/In state credit capital, is state an uncountable noun?
8/Do you write it was the remark or it were the remarks here?
9/ Is limited an adjectif or a verb used in the passive?
10/Do you write The basic construction investment capital or The basic constructional investment capiatal ? Why?What is the difference btw them?
12/ Is there comma after so?
Thanks
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Hi It might be easier if you just post your writing and ask for comments about it, as although you wish to query a few specific points, there are other problems in your writing which you have not addressed. For example with question 2 you have queried April/April's but not the fact that the 'the' is incorrect. It's rather difficult to both work through your questions and comment effectively on the whole text.
- Hi It might be easier if you just post your writing and ask for comments about it, as although you wish to query a few specific points, there are other problems in your writing which you have not addressed.
- For example with question 2 you have queried April/April's but not the fact that the 'the' is incorrect.
- It's rather difficult to both work through your questions and comment effectively on the whole text.
- So, here's my comments and suggestions for you.
- Government's April meeting: Announcing targets and capital for people to (decide and supervise - these two words do not make sense here).
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Hi
It might be easier if you just post your writing and ask for comments about it, as although you wish to query a few specific points, there are other problems in your writing which you have not addressed. For example with question 2 you have queried April/April's but not the fact that the 'the' is incorrect. It's rather difficult to both work through your questions and comment effective
It might be easier if you just post your writing and ask for comments about it, as although you wish to query a few specific points, there are other problems in your writing which you have not addressed. For example with question 2 you have queried April/April's but not the fact that the 'the' is incorrect. It's rather difficult to both work through your questions and comment effective
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Thanks but it's diffilcult to read.
If you have time, please answer question by question.
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If you have time, please answer question by question.
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Ok, but it won't fix all the errors in this piece of writing.
The April's socio-economic growth has remained the same as that of the first 3 months. Industrial production had fairly high production and step by step resumed the previous growth pace.However, many problems haven't been overcome: The basic construction investment capital,especially the st
The April's socio-economic growth has remained the same as that of the first 3 months. Industrial production had fairly high production and step by step resumed the previous growth pace.However, many problems haven't been overcome: The basic construction investment capital,especially the st
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Very sorry. I've realized now you're right.
So please correct this paragraph and if possible, tell me why I am wrong.If I write a/b , that means both are possible and interchangeable in this context. Thanks
Government's April meeting: Announcing the targets and capital/targets and capital for people to decide and supervise.
So please correct this paragraph and if possible, tell me why I am wrong.If I write a/b , that means both are possible and interchangeable in this context. Thanks
Government's April meeting: Announcing the targets and capital/targets and capital for people to decide and supervise.
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