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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Write your opinions about my essay. thanks.

0As far as I remember, languages have always interested me in a way or another. I'm just fascinated already for a thought, that someday I'm able to speak 4-5 languages. English was quite natural language to get started. 02br
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00Now I've been studying English more than 6 years, and still I'm not as good as I would wish for. More I have studiet, more I have noticed that it really isn't so simple to learn a new language. And English should be easy, but what about Spanish or France - I have to say that those languages goes far beyond my skills. But I'm not going to fall with my dreams, no, not yet. I know it may be exhausting sometimes to learn more and more, but I keep going. I have decided to do all what it takes. 02br
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00But Im happy about the fact that I have a chance to learn languages so much what I am ready to learn. Everybody are not blessed with the same opportunity. Among all this happiness and joy, I should remember to use my priviledged situation right. 02br
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00-M.N. 02br
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00I know that it doesn't offer more new and revolutionary, bur write your opinions anyway. Thank you.0-
  

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0As far back as I can remember, I have always been interested in languages. The thought that one day I may be able to speak four or even five languages really fascinates me, moreover I found English quite a natural language to learn. 02br 02br 00I've studied English for more than 6 years so far, and still I'm not as good as I'd like to.

  • 0As far back as I can remember, I have always been interested in languages.
  • The thought that one day I may be able to speak four or even five languages really fascinates me, moreover I found English quite a natural language to learn.
  • 02br 02br 00I've studied English for more than 6 years so far, and still I'm not as good as I'd like to.
  • The more I study, the more I notice that it is not such an easy thing to learn a new language.
  • Then again, English is supposed to be quite an easy language to learn, but Spanish or French really go far beyond my natural skill.
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0As far back as I can remember, I have always been interested in languages. The thought that one day I may be able to speak four or even five languages really fascinates me, moreover I found English quite a natural language to learn. 02br
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00I've studied English for more than 6 years so far, and still I'm not as good as I'd like to. The more I study, the more I notice tha
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01cite10YoHf12cite10As far back as I can remember, I have always been interested in languages. The thought that one day I may be able to speak four or even five languages really fascinates me, moreover I found English quite a natural language to learn. 12br
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10I've studied English for more than 6 years so far, and
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0Hello Anon (MN?) and YoHF,02br
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00YoHF’s re-draft is excellent, with a very good style. You should try and follow the style and rhythm of the English. In case you look at it too closely, there are a couple of minor errors in it which I show below.02br
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00As no-one else has replied to you regarding your original version, I thought I would help and
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0Woops, looks like I has a couple of typing mistakes there. 05002br
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00Didn't see them when I read the text again, thanks for noticing and correcting them Nick. 05102br
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