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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Write some things you associate with britain

can you please mark it for me and correct any mistakes and I am sorry to say that i Am confused about naming it is it an essay or paragraph so please name it for me.

whenever i turn the TV channel and see a wonderful double decker bus I definitely associate it with a great ,ancient, and very exciting country that is very famous for its pictureseque monumenatl classics where all its visitors would surely have nice tours ,of course, without missing the great big ben which is also one of its exquisite places as well as its being one of the seven wonders of the world,and this country is also famous for those good-looking royal guards that you can never see elsewhere, this country is called the great Britain

please check the quotations and i can't really put a better ending so excuse my ignorance thanks very much
  

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Anonymous can you please mark it for me and correct any mistakes and I am sorry to say that i Am confused about naming it is it an essay or paragraph so please name it for me. whenever i turn the TV channel and see a wonderful double decker bus I definitely associate it with a great ,ancient, and very exciting country that is very famous for its pictureseque monumenatl classics where all its visitors would surely have nice tours ,of course, without missing the great big ben which is also one of its exquisite places as well as its being one of the seven wonders of the world,and this country is also famous for those good-looking royal guards that you can never see elsewhere, this country is called the great Britain please check the quotations and i can't really put a better ending so excuse my ignorance thanks very much Hi, This is one giant, run-on sentence. You absolutely must break this down into separate sentences You must you capital letters where they are needed.

  • Anonymous can you please mark it for me and correct any mistakes and I am sorry to say that i Am confused about naming it is it an essay or paragraph so please name it for me.
  • whenever i turn the TV channel and see a wonderful double decker bus I definitely associate it with a great ,ancient, and very exciting country that is very famous for its pictureseque monumenatl classics where all its visitors would surely have nice tours ,of course, without missing the great big ben which is also one of its exquisite places as well as its being one of the seven wonders of the world,and this country is also famous for those good-looking royal guards that you can never see elsewhere, this country is called the great Britain please check the quotations and i can't really put a better ending so excuse my ignorance thanks very much Hi, This is one giant, run-on sentence.
  • You absolutely must break this down into separate sentences You must you capital letters where they are needed.
  • Proper nouns, the pronoun "I" and at the start of each sentence.
  • If you fix those two things, someone will come back and take another look.
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Anonymouscan you please mark it for me and correct any mistakes and I am sorry to say that i Am confused about naming it is it an essay or paragraph so please name it for me. whenever i turn the TV channel and see a wonderful double decker bus I definitely associate it with a great ,ancient, and very exciting country that is very famous for its pictureseque monumenatl cl

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