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Hampeh Posted 20 years ago
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write email to Request for a new notebook
hi all, can somebody here give good example about formal letter. the title is Request for a new notebook
i'll try to draft it...need your help to check it in term of grammar, wording and etc2..
Subject : Request for a new notebook
Dear Michelle,
The matter above is referred
I start join this company last year on November 2005. Since that date, I’m using IBM R40, which has a lot of problem like a blue screen, and battery cannot stay for longer period (only about 5 minutes).
In October last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore. I already report to helpdesk but they cannot do anything because the notebook is out of warranty.
For your information, I already sent the same request before this notebook totally corrupted. Unfortunately, no action has been taken to rectify this problem.
Your attention is highly appreciated.
I am looking forward to hear form you.
Regards,
Requestor
hmm..is it ok?
i'll try to draft it...need your help to check it in term of grammar, wording and etc2..
Subject : Request for a new notebook
Dear Michelle,
The matter above is referred
I start join this company last year on November 2005. Since that date, I’m using IBM R40, which has a lot of problem like a blue screen, and battery cannot stay for longer period (only about 5 minutes).
In October last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore. I already report to helpdesk but they cannot do anything because the notebook is out of warranty.
For your information, I already sent the same request before this notebook totally corrupted. Unfortunately, no action has been taken to rectify this problem.
Your attention is highly appreciated.
I am looking forward to hear form you.
Regards,
Requestor
hmm..is it ok?
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Subject : Request for a new notebook Dear Michelle, I joined the company in November 2005 and have always used an IBM R40, which has a lot of problems like a blue screen, and a battery that only lasts for about 5 minutes per charge. Last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore. I already reported this to the helpdesk but they cannot do anything because the notebook is out of warranty.
- Subject : Request for a new notebook Dear Michelle, I joined the company in November 2005 and have always used an IBM R40, which has a lot of problems like a blue screen, and a battery that only lasts for about 5 minutes per charge.
- Last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore.
- I already reported this to the helpdesk but they cannot do anything because the notebook is out of warranty.
- I am therefore requesting a new notebook.
- For your information, I already sent the same request before this notebook totally corrupted.
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Subject : Request for a new notebook
Dear Michelle,
I joined the company in November 2005 and have always used an IBM R40, which has a lot of problems like a blue screen, and a battery that only lasts for about 5 minutes per charge.
Last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore. I already reported this to the helpdesk but the
Dear Michelle,
I joined the company in November 2005 and have always used an IBM R40, which has a lot of problems like a blue screen, and a battery that only lasts for about 5 minutes per charge.
Last month, the notebook totally corrupted (motherboard problem) and cannot be used anymore. I already reported this to the helpdesk but the
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