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Mostafa Taghavi Kani Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

write about a time when you accomplished something you did not think you could do

It was 2002 and I was studying electrical engineering when one of my professors asks me to design my first electric circuit. What’s more, Not only it was inherently a designing project, but also since it was the first time that such a circuit was supposed to be designed, it was a kind of invention. Aside from these, my fear firstly emanated from being inexperienced. In fact since it was my first scientific endeavor, and also it depended on my creativity, so I didn’t know exactly from where I should start. Furthermore, I had no any advisor who helps me for doing that job. I mean, although my teacher asked me to do such an arduous job, but he couldn’t help me since he was very busy.
  

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You need to add more information about how your design was successful. Don't talk only about your difficulties and fear. Clive

  • You need to add more information about how your design was successful.
  • Don't talk only about your difficulties and fear.
  • Clive
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You need to add more information about how your design was successful.
Don't talk only about your difficulties and fear.

Clive
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thanks dear Clive,

In fact this question is one of the TOEFL IBT speaking tasks which I should answer it in 45 seconds. actually I want some native person to correct my grammar, collocations & etc.

thanks for your answer
Regards, Mostafa
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It was 2002 and I was studying electrical engineering . One of my professors asked me to design my first electric circuit. It was not just a simple design project, but also the first time that such a circuit was to be designed. Aside from this, my fear came from being inexperienced. In fact, since it was my first scientific endeavor and since it depended on my creativi

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