INVITATION
Friday 20th August
6pm
at Joey’s Bar
From:<…@...>
To:<…@...>
Subject: Steven Rosenstein’s retirement party
Hi John
Just a quick note to tell you that our company is celebrating a retirement party for Steven Rosenstein. It will be on Friday 20th August which was also his first day at work 30 years ago. The party will take place at Joey’s bar warm and cozy.
Looking forward to seeing you there.
Best wises
Max
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