Write a paragraph about your plan in the future

Almost everyone has their own plan for the future. There are 3 goals I plan to gain before the age of 22. Firstly, after graduating from the university, the first thing I want to do is travelling to Japan. It is my dream country. I am a big fan of a detective manga series called “Case Closed”, also known as “Detective Conan”. I wish to set foot in everywhere in that series such as: Hibiya Park, Yasaka Koshindo Temple, Kinkaku Pagoda,... . Also, I want to have dinner in a sushi restaurant in order to try all kinds of sushi there. Secondly, I intend to volunteer for an Animal Rescue Organization. When I was a kid, I often watched video about rescuing animals in critical condition or abandoned. Those Rescuers are like angels to me. Consequently, I want to be like them to rescue and take care of those poor animals. Finally, I am going to have a long-term holiday with my family. After all, family is the most important thing I need to cherish. Although the future is unpredictable, i will take steps to achieve my plan

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