write a motivation letter:please correct my letter

as a citizen of third world country,has opened my eyes in how far we are from the health evolution.
born,grown in .....live 19 years there,i didn't realize how our heath system is miserable until i became a student in pharmacy where we did some training course in the hospital located in my town.their i was faced with the cruel reality,no respect of the less health measure . and a pharmacist does'nt even exist in that world.
that why.i whould get the oppurtunity to join the university of belgium firstable to develop my capacities requierd in my field as pharmacist,secondaly as known that belgium has established a project of clinical pharmacist and to date 54 hospital converted to it , it is un agredible succes that imazed me and pushed mee to choose belgium. so belgium is the perfect place where to get a training programme as clinical pharmacist and in the future use it to develop,even just little our rules in hospital .