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Garimarga Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Write a letter to your client. In your letter •introduce yourself •explain why you cannot attend the appointment. •apologise and propose an alternative appointment time

Can you help me to check this letter, grammar and help me to improve this letter or make it more better.






Dear Mr Hodgkins

I have an interview for the Assistant Manager’s position scheduled for next Thursday, 25 March at 9.30am.

I sincerely apologise for any inconvenience this may cause.

I am still eager to be interviewed for this position, and would be very grateful if the time of my interview could be changed. I am available any time on the afternoon of Thursday 25 March, or the following day Friday 26 March. If an alternative time is available, I can be contacted by telephone on 02 9949 6739.

Once again, I apologise for any inconvenience, and hope it is still possible to reschedule the interview. I am truly interested in this position.

Yours sincerely

Mirko Bendall



  

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Hello, garimarga - and welcome to English Forums. You have not followed the directions, in that you have not written to a client . However, I have struck out unnecessary verbiage.

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  • Hello, garimarga - and welcome to English Forums.
  • You have not followed the directions, in that you have not written to a client .
  • However, I have struck out unnecessary verbiage.
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  • I sincerely apologise for any inconvenience this may cause.
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Hello, garimarga - and welcome to English Forums. You have not followed the directions, in that you have not written to a client. However, I have struck out unnecessary verbiage.



Dear Mr Hodgkins

I have an interview for the Assistant Manager’s position scheduled for next Thursday, 25 March, at 9.30am.

I sincerely apologise for any in
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