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Thiên Sơn Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Write a letter.

would you mind helping my letter,please.

Question: Your English friend, Emma, has sent you some birthday money for you to buy a music CD. Write an email to Emma.

My answer:

Dear Emma,

i am delighted when i receive your present. As you know, i am going to use it for buying a English music CD. i really need it. Now i am preparing for an english test next month. The CD helps me improve my listening English skill.

Thanks for your present.

Best,

MIN

  

Top answer

Hi Min, Here are some points to help you. 1. Do you know that "i" is not a valid English word?

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  • Hi Min, Here are some points to help you.
  • 1.
  • Do you know that "i" is not a valid English word?
  • " i " is a letter of the alphabet, and it is a vowel, but it is not a good word.
  • Your writing uses this many times.
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Hi Min,

Here are some points to help you.

1.

Do you know that "i" is not a valid English word? " i " is a letter of the alphabet, and it is a vowel, but it is not a good word. Your writing uses this many times. So you have many mistakes.


2.

Emma, has sent you some money. This happened in the past. When you write the letter, you have already receive

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