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BW2/3 Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

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It was disgusting when a wrinkle faced man ogled at the young woman on the Queen's Pier

Is the above sentence correct?

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I think it's fine as is, though I would say "ogled the young woman", omitting "at".

  • I think it's fine as is, though I would say "ogled the young woman", omitting "at".
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I think it's fine as is, though I would say "ogled the young woman", omitting "at".

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