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Where is the introduction paragraph? Every Task 1 requires an introduction. In the introduction, describe the table or figure. Paraphrase the title of the figure or table, r the essay prompt, and describe its contents, but do not mention any data values.

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The table lists

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The table lists numbers of people in each of four countries that watched four different types of sporting events on TV. The four countries listed are Australia, the UK, the USA, and Canada. The types of sports are tennis matches, golf tournaments, motor racing and athletics. The table also gives sums for each country and for each sport.

You must look at the figure or table very carefully and be mathematically exact, precise and accurate. You have not done this, so most of your essay is incorrect.

Overall, ~~it is clear that~~ tennis and goft (Be sure to copy the names and numbers accurately.) are the most watched in terms of the total viewership. In addition, US and UK citizens pay attention to (incorrect ) watch more sports on TV than people in the 2 two (IF the number is not a data value, and is small, use words, not digits) remaining countries. (You have not told the reader the names of these countries, so the reader is confused.)

Americans ~~people~~ spend the most time watching goft, with 11.2%, (incorrect) which is 2.5 times more than the Australians, who are in second place. ~~3 three remaining countries~~. (It actually four times more than UK residents, not 2.5. And it is slightly more than the total number of all the other three countries combined.) In the USA, watching tennis is the highest percentage (7%) (incorrect) while this ~~figure~~ is just nearly 6% (incorrect) in Australia, Canada and 6.6% (incorrect) in UK.

Motor racing in UK is also considered as a popular sport, which accounts for 6.4%. (incorrect) On the other hand, the 3 remaining countries just constitues for less than 4% (incorrect) for watching this kind of sport. For athleics, the people of these 4 countries spend (incorrect usage) from 3% to around 6% to watch this sport.

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