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Mnrz57 Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
Would you revise my sentence?
Hello All
please anyone revise this sentence as if a native person say it
if you don't have appropriate money, you don't need to pay the fare, the needed money to go to your destination will be paid
thank you very much
please anyone revise this sentence as if a native person say it
if you don't have appropriate money, you don't need to pay the fare, the needed money to go to your destination will be paid
thank you very much
Top answer
Hello, I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Do you mean that if I don't have the money I don't need to pay, because someone else will pay? In any case, for the first part you need to say: If you don't have the appropriate money, you don't need to pay the fare.
- Hello, I'm not sure what you're trying to say.
- Do you mean that if I don't have the money I don't need to pay, because someone else will pay?
- In any case, for the first part you need to say: If you don't have the appropriate money, you don't need to pay the fare.
- For the second part, I'm not sure what you mean, but better English is: Your fare will be paid.
- You could drop the first 'your fare' so as not to repeat.
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Hello,
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Do you mean that if I don't have the money I don't need to pay, because someone else will pay?
In any case, for the first part you need to say:
If you don't have the appropriate money, you don't need to pay the fare.
For the second part, I'm not sure what you mean, but better English is:
I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Do you mean that if I don't have the money I don't need to pay, because someone else will pay?
In any case, for the first part you need to say:
If you don't have the appropriate money, you don't need to pay the fare.
For the second part, I'm not sure what you mean, but better English is:
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well thanks,
actually, I saw this message in a taxi and was written by the driver, he meant, if you don't have money you don't have to pay and also if you are planing to go somewhere and you have'nt enough money to go there, i will give you the money to reach there,
and I want to know what it will become in English but not in 2 or 3 lines of sentences, as in my language it was writ
actually, I saw this message in a taxi and was written by the driver, he meant, if you don't have money you don't have to pay and also if you are planing to go somewhere and you have'nt enough money to go there, i will give you the money to reach there,
and I want to know what it will become in English but not in 2 or 3 lines of sentences, as in my language it was writ
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I do not think that you require the word "appropriate" here. You can simply say:
If you don't have the money, you don't need to pay the fare.
I am also not clear on who will pay the fare.
If you don't have the money, you don't need to pay the fare.
I am also not clear on who will pay the fare.
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If the passenger has some money, the driver of the taxi can take that much money and pay the balance himself. That's the reason I opted to remove appropriate/adequate.
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thanks for "pay the balance" it was new to me 
so a question has came to my mind
is this phrase (pay the balance) is used fo
so a question has came to my mind
is this phrase (pay the balance) is used fo
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