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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Would you put a comma here?

Would you put a comma after 'the door opens'?


Jay moves down the corridor, arrives at the exit door. But before he can reach for the handle, the door opens and he finds himself face to face with Billy.

  

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Broadly speaking, commas indicate a slight pause and thus slow down the action a little. Would you put a comma after 'the door opens'? No.

  • Broadly speaking, commas indicate a slight pause and thus slow down the action a little.
  • Would you put a comma after 'the door opens'?
  • No.
  • I'd also edit the first sentence as shown below.
  • Jay moves down the corridor and arrives at the exit door.
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Broadly speaking, commas indicate a slight pause and thus slow down the action a little.

Would you put a comma after 'the door opens'?

No.

I'd also edit the first sentence as shown below.

Jay moves down the corridor and arrives at the exit door. But before he can reach for the handle, the door opens and he finds himself face to face with B

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