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Naldo Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Would you proofread my tranlsation?

You Alone Can Enjoy an Eggplant Sandwich

Although she is used to irregular work schedule, but in recent few months, she has been stuck inside home.
Like a bear in winter, she stayed home and only left when she needed food.
Meanwhile she had to finish her work she had put aside, so she had a lot of work to do this weekend.
She was sleeping on the side of her blanket with books and snacks on, crouching and frowning her face. She slowly opened her eyes.
She was like that for some time, then she rose and went to the kitchen, drank some warm water and opened the curtain.
She then frowned and closed it because the sunshine was too bright.
A moment light was covered by dark again, and dust was drifting through the air.
She couldn’t help it so she opened the curtain and window wide.
Then she went to the sink, brushed her eyes with some water, tied her hair, and then swing opened the small refrigerator.
There weren’t many ingredients.
Only frozen bread, dry eggplant, cherry tomatoes, and cheese with fungus.
She unfrozen the bread and started to cut off the fungus from cheese carefully.

Eggplant Sandwich Recipe

Ingredients: 1 ciabatta bread, 1/2 eggplant (2 big spoon olive oil, small amount of salt, pepper), 1 big spoon mayonnaise, 2 small spoon of whole grain mustard, 1 cube of gruyere cheese, 4 cherry tomatoes.

1. Slice the ciabatta bread into half and bake them in a dry pan.
(Tip: Oven is also fine and if you want some flavor you may add butter and bake)
2. Put 1 big spoon of olive oil in the pan, and bake the eggplant with salt and pepper. Put left olive oil then turn eggplant over until finish baking.
(Tip: Eggplant will absorb oil as much as there are and it will get soft and delicious as it absorb.)
3. Spread mayonnaise and whole grain mustard on the baked ciabatta bread.
(Tip: You may add ketchup to your appetite.)
4. Put baked eggplant, gruyere cheese, bake eggplant, tomatoes in order.
(Tip: If you do not have gruyere cheese, change it different one)
(Tip: You can replace eggplant to pine mushroom. In this case, bake with butter and it will add more flavor.)
(Tip: If you put some sliced apple, it will do good.)

It was yummy considering it was an improvised sandwich, although the bread was tough because it was old.
She made strong apple tea and enjoyed the graceful atmosphere. It has been for a while.
She bite sandwich for a long time.
For someone who likes meat, it would be rather unappealing, but for her, she liked it.
From outside, she could hear the dairy selling truck sound.
She closed the window and played classical music, then enjoyed all her meal on the table.
It has been long since she enjoyed eating alone.
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To practice, I translated an article into English, and I am sure it needs many corrections. Thank you everyone.
  
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