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Moli Posted 17 years ago
when I go out with my daughter,many can’t believe I am her mother.In a parents meeting,I noticed some parents looked at me curiously.The next day,my daughter told me that her classmates’ parents commented I am young and beautiful.
In the past,I always complained that I wasted my youth.When the girls with the same age as me falled in love and went to work,I had to take care of my baby at home.But now, I have got a different thought.My daughter will go into the middle school this Summer.More importantly,I and my daughter are intimate friends,both of us like to study,play and go shopping together.
My daughter will be a college student when I am 40.So I feel better to be a young mother.
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the young mother
I got married at 22,so I am a young mother.when I go out with my daughter,many can’t believe I am her mother.In a parents meeting,I noticed some parents looked at me curiously.The next day,my daughter told me that her classmates’ parents commented I am young and beautiful.
In the past,I always complained that I wasted my youth.When the girls with the same age as me falled in love and went to work,I had to take care of my baby at home.But now, I have got a different thought.My daughter will go into the middle school this Summer.More importantly,I and my daughter are intimate friends,both of us like to study,play and go shopping together.
My daughter will be a college student when I am 40.So I feel better to be a young mother.
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