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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Which one is better? Watching movies on tablets or going to the cinema. As to which one is preferable, that might seem to be a matter of personal choice. However, if health, psychological and social parameters are considered I would lean towards going to the cinema.
The first argument against using a tablet or a phone for watching movies is that it is required to tilt your head and hold them up for a long time which can be considered as an inappropriate use. These can be bad for your body especially your neck. Moreover, designed and optimized for individual use screen of these gadgets are small, as a result it is not possible to see all details on the screen and above all a group of people cannot enjoy watching their favourite movies simultaneously.
Perhaps the term "you can watch it according to your will" is the only argument in favour of watching films on phones or tablets. But there are a lot of supports for going to the movies. For example, people are social and movie theatres are good places for socializing with others. Another reason is that an individual who watch movie among the other people would be inspired by a sense of inclusion which has effects on one’s life satisfaction.

In conclusion, based on health, psychological and social factors utilizing electronic gadgets such as tablets to see films has negative effects on people and going to movie theatre would boost life satisfaction.