Would you please rectify my recommendation letter?

Subject: Letter of Recommendation for Tadashi Noori

To whom it may concern,

As his chemistry and biology teacher at AB High School, I had the pleasure of teaching Tadashi for three years. So, let me tell you about him. He is disciplined, well-behaved, persistent, and hardworking.

As far as I can recall, Tadashi maintained such a good discipline in the class that all his peers would nicknamed him “Brian Tracy” and would claim that he is the most punctual student they have ever seen. I myself never saw him being tardy or lazy either. In addition, although he was only a teenager, he had a wide knowledge of success. It might interest you to know that most of his classmates learned how to set goals and how to manage their time from him. I am sure any one interacting with him would consider his discipline.

It might sound a bit exaggerating, but during my ten years of teaching, Tadashi is emotionally the strongest student I have ever met. I have never seen him being depressed, disappointed, or discourages. Nor did I see him coming across as a sulky, rude, or overbearing student in the school. He is very patient, energetic, and well-behaved. I am confident that he will be capable of working under pressure and getting on with people very well, especially in academic environments.

What is more remarkable is Tadashi’s persistence and determination. If you ask his peers, they will assert that he is of those goal chasers who never quits or gets bored doing what he means to do. “No grit, no success,” is of his philosophies. In addition, Tadashi …. Don’t convince him that he needs to devote twenty-five years of his life to discover the philosophy of success, for he will surely do it.

Thank you for considering Tadashi’s application! He has my highest recommendations for whatever placement he desires to attain. For more inquiries, please do not hesitate to contact me through *****.com.

Sincerely,

Chemistry and Biology Instructor

Ahmad John