Would you please let me know if the below text is written correctly
The problem of employing agrochemicals is that first they can contaminate the environment; second we are the consumers of those agriculture products so we introduce a new toxin into our body whenever we consume non organic food and more importantly the pathogens can develop a resistance strategy against the chemical treatment over time.
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The sentence is confused by the different subjects. You should separate the text into several sentences. You write "the problem" and then describe three different problems.
- The sentence is confused by the different subjects.
- You should separate the text into several sentences.
- You write "the problem" and then describe three different problems.
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The sentence is confused by the different subjects. You should separate the text into several sentences.
You write "the problem" and then describe three different problems.
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