Would you please help me write this letter in an attractive way?

1b00I need to invite church members to participate in our event. I want them to response positively and have the willing to help me. Would you please help me write this in a polite and attractive way? Thank you very much in advance for your help.02b02br
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00Dear church members:02br
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00The Community Development Department of ABC is making an effort to help create a bonded community and stabilize current businesses. To that end, the City is planning to hold our first Spring Festival on the Historic Powder Springs Town Square, to be held in April 1, 2007.02br
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00I'm writing to invite you, the members of First Baptist Church to participate in our exciting event. To be able to make this event successful, we need your support in our musical part of the event. We believe that by participating in these event you will not only showcase your talents, but also render a valuable community service to the citizens.02br
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00One behalf of the Community Development, I thank you for your consideration of this request, and I look forward to hearing from you and seeing you in this exciting event. If you have any questions, or need further clarification, please do not hesitate to contact me at xxx-xxx-xxxx or email me at 01a00Email Removed00">01span00Email Removed02span02a02br
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00Sincerely yours,0-