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Nancy19820 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Would you please help me write following paragraphs grammatically?

1b00Please help me. I thank you much in advance for your help.02b02br
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00-Future of Halong is in the hand of the youth of Halong. We are planning for the children’s future community. We need to understand and know what is suitable for the future generation and what the youngsters need and want to see happen in Halong. “Full of optimism, ideas, and energy, youth makes fine downtown revitalization leaders.” Having a youth business and leadership program in Halong would help the City is also a way to educate the children. We need to preserve and try to keep the most talented kids to stay and raise their family here in Halong. 02br
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00-00High quality housing is critical to attract more professional jobs, and should be established. For those who can afford high housing market are those in professional jobs such as management, education, and health care industry.02br
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00-We must solve our downtown-parking problem. For instance, there was a new Wal-Mart opened on Halong, and was looking for a place to hire employees, but did not know where. They wanted to be in downtown Halong but there is not enough parking to accommodate the expected number of people who may come to apply for a job. 01b02b02br
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2br 01i 00-01b 00 The future02b 00 of Halong is in the 01b 00hands02b 00 of the youth of Halong. We are planning for 01b 00our 02b 00children’s future community. We need to 01b 00understand what02b 00 is suitable for01b 00 future generations02b 00 and what 01b 00our young people want02b 00 to see happen in Halong.

  • 2br 01i 00-01b 00 The future02b 00 of Halong is in the 01b 00hands02b 00 of the youth of Halong.
  • We are planning for 01b 00our 02b 00children’s future community.
  • We need to 01b 00understand what02b 00 is suitable for01b 00 future generations02b 00 and what 01b 00our young people want02b 00 to see happen in Halong.
  • 01b 00F02b 00ull of optimism, ideas and energy, 01b 00our youth02b 00 make fine downtown revitalization leader01b 00s.
  • 02b 00 01b 00Holding02b 00 a youth business and leadership program in Halong would help the City 01b 00and02b 00 is also a way to educate 01b 00our02b 00 children.
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01i00-01b00 The future02b00 of Halong is in the 01b00hands02b00 of the youth of Halong. We are planning for 01b00our 02b00children’s future community. We need to 01b00understand what02b00 is suitable for01b00 future generations02b00 and what 01b00our

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