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Nancy19820 Posted 19 years ago
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Would you please help me with grammar of the following paragraph?

0I have discussed with Pam regarding the Festival of Music. We have up to $4,000 to cover the costs of the festival, which including over time of staffs, polices, and sanitation workers and sound systems.00 Additionally, o00ther fees may occur. Therefore, we can not afford to have a festival 00that00 lasts more than two hours.00 00Also, because this is our very first time holding the festival, we would like to start with something small and low.00 02br
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0 Pam and I have discussed the Music Festival. We have up to $4,000 to spend, which we need to cover the over-time of staff members, police, and sanitation workers as well as sound systems. It is possible that in addition to that there may be more which we haven't predicted. Because of that, our festival cannot last for more than two hours. Since this is our very first time to direct the festiva
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