Would you please help me to revise my Motivation letter?

Hi, I really appreciate your help on revising the below motivation letter.

The scenario is that I need to write to my former boss in HQ who will help me to forward my M/L to legal colleagues to considering.

Would you please let me know your comments on the below draft?

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Hi **,

I am writing to you seeking your help in respect of a potential international assignment from China to Europe.

Motivated by the aspiration to be international in-house legal counsel, I hope to have international exposure in both corporate matters and commercial matters, encouraged by the mobility scenario promoted by the group.

As you know, I am now working in XXX Asia Pacific Legal department as legal counsel within ***’s team.

After having been in XXX for three years, I have developed myself as a confirmed corporate counsel specializing in M&A and restructuring, with experience in restructuring of ##, spinning of ### business, setup of #### operations in China.

I have devoted myself to some international sales contracts with our key accounts such as ++.

I believe I can bring added value to our European colleagues for the challenges in face of XXX, considering the ~~scenario.

I really appreciate your time and help to considering my application.

I am at your disposal for any instructions or enquiries you may have.

Best regards,

[name]

Enc: Resume

P.S. I am comfortable to make financing arrangement for my wife on my own.