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Sashianuradhi Posted 15 years ago
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Would you please help me to correct this sentence

This also led to my active involvement in conducting community health projects such as prevention of dengue and malaria, well child and well women clinics and screening for noncommunicable diseases in rural Sri Lanka, organised in collaboration with the World Health Organization.

please correct if you find any loopholes or any better way to express this. any help will be greately appriciated.
  

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Hello, sashianuradhi - and welcome to English Forums. Your sentence seem good to me. I suggest: This also led to my active involvement in community health projects such as the prevention of dengue and malaria, well-child and well-woman clinics , and screening for noncommunicable diseases in rural Sri Lanka, organised in collaboration with the World Health Organization.

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Hello, sashianuradhi - and welcome to English Forums. Your sentence seem good to me. I suggest:

This also led to my active involvement in community health projects such as the prevention of dengue and malaria, well-child and well-woman clinics, and screening for noncommunicable diseases in rural Sri Lanka, organised in collaboration with the World Heal
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