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Nhi83 Posted 18 years ago
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Would you please help me saying the following in a better way.

Thank you in advance for your help.

Out entertainers have confirmed and the stage size will work fine for them. If it’s all possible, we would like to preserve the stage for October 3 Event. We would like to pick it up on October 2 at 1:00 p.m.




Please let me know if this time works for you. Thank you for your help.
  

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Out entertainers have confirmed and the stage size will work fine for them. If it’s all possible, we would like to preserve the stage for October 3 Event. m.

  • Out entertainers have confirmed and the stage size will work fine for them.
  • If it’s all possible, we would like to preserve the stage for October 3 Event.
  • m.
  • Please let me know if this time works for you.
  • Thank you for your help.
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Out entertainers have confirmed and the stage size will work fine for them. If it’s all possible, we would like to preserve the stage for October 3 Event. We would like to pick it up on October 2 at 1:00 p.m.
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Thank you for your help.

That sentence refers to the stage. We would like to pick up the stage on Oct. 2 at 1:00 p.m.
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Your image of a stage is something different from ours, then. A stage is a fixed, built-in feature of an auditorium, usually. I wonder what we will call whatever it is that you are thinking of?
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Please let us know if this works with your schedule?

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