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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Would you please help me improve my paragraph?

Hello!

Would you please check my sentence below and help me improve it? Do you think it was written correctly?

I'm afraid you are becoming confused recently seeing ( or seeing that / seeing as / seeing as how ) I favourite (Well, I am not sure of the internet language or what the correct word/verb for thanking somebody's comments in social media is) your posts in less than a minute actually once ( or as soon as? / or the moment ? ) you have sent. It made me feel that I'm kind of a stalker.''
  

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Good morning (I really like your user name, by the way): Your sentence is very confusing to me. I don't know for sure what you are trying to say. Could you rephrase it yourself, without parenthetical commentary, and with a little background as to context.

— Philip

  • Good morning (I really like your user name, by the way): Your sentence is very confusing to me.
  • I don't know for sure what you are trying to say.
  • Could you rephrase it yourself, without parenthetical commentary, and with a little background as to context.
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Good morning (I really like your user name, by the way):
Your sentence is very confusing to me. I don't know for sure what you are trying to say. Could you rephrase it yourself, without parenthetical commentary, and with a little background as to context.
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