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Nancy19820 Posted 20 years ago
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In addition, Phuc and Phong have told me that most of the home base businesses are their second jobs and I have checked the database that home base businesses have been paid the permit/license fees of $105. Some have just started their businesses this year, and some no longer pay their fees. Also, some businesses do not even have a location here in ABC. Cost of renting is their major concerned. They can’t afford to move to a business location because their income is very limited and cost of renting is high.
In addition, Phuc and Phong have told me that most of the home base businesses are their second jobs and I have checked the database that home base businesses have been paid the permit/license fees of $105. Some have just started their businesses this year, and some no longer pay their fees. Also, some businesses do not even have a location here in ABC. Cost of renting is their major concerned. They can’t afford to move to a business location because their income is very limited and cost of renting is high.
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In addition, **** and Phong have told me that most of the home based businesses are their second jobs. I have found out that home based businesses have to pay a permit/license fees of $105. While some have just started their businesses this year, some no longer pay their fees.
- In addition, **** and Phong have told me that most of the home based businesses are their second jobs.
- I have found out that home based businesses have to pay a permit/license fees of $105.
- While some have just started their businesses this year, some no longer pay their fees.
- Also, some businesses are not located here in ABC, the cost of rent being their major concern.
- They can’t afford to move to a prominent business location because of their limited income and the high rental costs incurred in such areas.
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In addition, **** and Phong have told me that most of the home based businesses are their second jobs. I have found out that home based businesses have to pay a permit/license fees of $105. While some have just started their businesses this year, some no longer pay their fees. Also, some businesses are not located here in ABC, the cost of rent being their major concern. They can’t afford to move t
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