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Topic: The graph shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the UK, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
My essay:
The graph illustrate the amount of carbon dioxide per person, which was emitted by the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, although, the United Kingdom, decreased the average carbon dioxide emissions per person continually, it had the highest share of emitting. In addition, Italy and Portugal released carbon dioxide increasingly.
In 1967, the United Kingdom by emitting more than 10 metric tonnes carbon dioxide per person averagely. By passing the time the UK was able to reduce this amount to 8 metric tonnes in 2007, nevertheless, throughout the described interval, the United Kingdom was the first country. Trend of average carbon dioxide emission in Sweden had a different behavior, first of the all from 1967 to 1977, with a stunning rise, it reached at 10 metric tonnes and then, reduced to less than 6 metric tonnes.
On the other hand, Italy and Portugal evacuated 4.5 and 1.5 metric tonnes carbon dioxide per person respectively, while both countries, increased the emission of carbon dioxide per person and in 2007, Italy emitted 6 and Portugal released 8 metric tonnes carbon dioxide per person. in fact, in 2007 Sweden released the latest amount of carbon dioxide per person.
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- The graph illustrate [ subject/verb agreement ] the [ Is this not an average or mean?
- ] amount of carbon dioxide per person[ In IELTS do not copy more than three words as a phrase from the question, headings or rubric ], [see website below: no comma here ]which was emitted by[ 'in' is more appropriate ] the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
- com/grammar/relative-clauses Overall, although, [ incorrect way to use 'although': also check punctuation ] the United Kingdom, [ punctuation error ]decreased the average carbon dioxide emissions per person continually, it had the highest share of emitting.
- In addition[ contrast ], Italy and Portugal released carbon dioxide increasingly.
- [ Not a sentence: there is no finite verb.
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The graph illustrate [subject/verb agreement] the [Is this not an average or mean?] amount of carbon dioxide per person[In IELTS do not copy more than three words as a phrase from the question, headings or rubric], [see website below: no comma here]which was emitted by['in' is more appropriate] the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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