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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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0Enclosed is an article, “Traditional Small Business Marketing is Dead.” I wanted to share with you this article and hope that you might find the information useful.02br
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00Is the above sentence grammatically correct along with the commas used?02br
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00Thank you in advance for your help.0-
  

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0 The only alteration I would make is to put the full stop outside the quotation marks round the article title.0-
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0If you are writing this 01i00for a US audience02i00, then the period stays inside the quotes.0-
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0 I would write this sentence as follows:02br
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00Enclosed is an article (entitled), "Traditional Small Business Marketing is Dead". I wanted to share this article with you and hope that you will find the information useful.0-
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0Ah, optilang makes a good point:02br
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00wanted to share with you this article 00reads more naturally as 00wanted to share this article with you 0-
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0Hi guys,02br
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00I'd say either 00 01font00I wanted . . . and hoped . . . 01i01u00or02u00 02i00 I want . . . and hope . . .02font02br
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00I prefer the latter.02br
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00Best wishes, Clive02br
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