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0 My original plan is sending our QC for the container inspection by once or twice to see whether the factory has followed our instructions or not. After discussed with Amy yesterday, she though this is double work if the customer will conduct it as our manpower is short. Therefore, please give up. Thank you for your comment and support. 02 br
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00 The customer is not decide whether they will use SGS for inspection the container or not. But I think we should do the best by ourselves instead of thinking what the customer will do. If we are ensure all our procedure is correct, then customer is no excuse to charge us. We need to protect ourselves, so that I have this idea to discuss with you. 0-
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00 The customer is not decide whether they will use SGS for inspection the container or not. But I think we should do the best by ourselves instead of thinking what the customer will do. If we are ensure all our procedure is correct, then customer is no excuse to charge us. We need to protect ourselves, so that I have this idea to discuss with you. 0-
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02 br 00 My original plan 01 b 00 was to send 02 b 00 our QC for the container 01 b 00 inspection once 02 b 00 or twice to see whether the factory has followed our 01 b 00 instructions. In 02 b 00 01 b 00 discussion 02 b 00 with Amy yesterday, she 01 b 00 thought that this would be duplicated 02 b 00 work if the customer 01 b 00 conducts 02 b 00 it 01 b 00 , because 02 b 00 our manpower is short. Therefore 01 b 00 , we are giving up this project 02 b 00 .
- 02 br 00 My original plan 01 b 00 was to send 02 b 00 our QC for the container 01 b 00 inspection once 02 b 00 or twice to see whether the factory has followed our 01 b 00 instructions.
- In 02 b 00 01 b 00 discussion 02 b 00 with Amy yesterday, she 01 b 00 thought that this would be duplicated 02 b 00 work if the customer 01 b 00 conducts 02 b 00 it 01 b 00 , because 02 b 00 our manpower is short.
- Therefore 01 b 00 , we are giving up this project 02 b 00 .
- Thank you for your 01 b 00 comments 02 b 00 and support.
- The customer 01 b 00 has not decided 02 b 00 whether they will use SGS 01 b 00 to inspect 02 b 00 the 01 b 00 container.
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00 My original plan 01 b 00 was to send 02 b 00 our QC for the container 01 b 00 inspection once 02 b 00 or twice to see whether the factory has followed our 01 b 00 instructions. In 02 b 00 01 b 00 discussion 02 b 00 with Amy yesterday, she 01 b 00 thought that this would be duplicated 02 b 00
00 My original plan 01 b 00 was to send 02 b 00 our QC for the container 01 b 00 inspection once 02 b 00 or twice to see whether the factory has followed our 01 b 00 instructions. In 02 b 00 01 b 00 discussion 02 b 00 with Amy yesterday, she 01 b 00 thought that this would be duplicated 02 b 00
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