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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Would you please correct this financial statment for me.
Hi, how is everybody,
Thank you very much for your help in this forum.
Would you please correct my financial statement, I know it seems to be very primitive but I am so confused and I don’t know what to write.
My friends, any urgent replay will be much appreciated; due is on 29/01/2006. Thank you.
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My father is working as the head of **** department in **** since 19**. He spend most of his time to help *** patients, meantime he did not get any personal benefits or rises else but his salary which is about **** a year.
He had many offers from hospitals in ***(advance country), but be he prefer to help the patients in our country.
Now he is ** years old, and he was retired from his job, he doesn’t have any beneficial for his retirement, and his salary will be decreased to ** a year.
On the other hand, my mother was working as *** in a *** school, and she retired for about 5 years ago because of her bad health situation, and currently she receive only a *** a year.
All in all will make our family income about **** a year.
Although my father is very desiring to help me financially, he can’t afford it, and I couldn’t let this happen because we are * brothers in the family, and I am the bigger, which mean there are still * others, and they will enter college soon, and they need a lot of money.
I worked many times, and I enrolled in courses such as ***, *** and *** courses, but this really was affecting my studying at the university.
If you would like I can consider your help at this phase as a dept which I will return by working at your institute or company after I finish this program, because I honestly would like to be a researcher and scientist in this field, and I would like you to help me.
Thank you very much in advanced.
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Thank you very much for your help in this forum.
Would you please correct my financial statement, I know it seems to be very primitive but I am so confused and I don’t know what to write.
My friends, any urgent replay will be much appreciated; due is on 29/01/2006. Thank you.
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My father is working as the head of **** department in **** since 19**. He spend most of his time to help *** patients, meantime he did not get any personal benefits or rises else but his salary which is about **** a year.
He had many offers from hospitals in ***(advance country), but be he prefer to help the patients in our country.
Now he is ** years old, and he was retired from his job, he doesn’t have any beneficial for his retirement, and his salary will be decreased to ** a year.
On the other hand, my mother was working as *** in a *** school, and she retired for about 5 years ago because of her bad health situation, and currently she receive only a *** a year.
All in all will make our family income about **** a year.
Although my father is very desiring to help me financially, he can’t afford it, and I couldn’t let this happen because we are * brothers in the family, and I am the bigger, which mean there are still * others, and they will enter college soon, and they need a lot of money.
I worked many times, and I enrolled in courses such as ***, *** and *** courses, but this really was affecting my studying at the university.
If you would like I can consider your help at this phase as a dept which I will return by working at your institute or company after I finish this program, because I honestly would like to be a researcher and scientist in this field, and I would like you to help me.
Thank you very much in advanced.
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My father was working as the head of **** department in **** between 19** and 20**. He spent most of his time helping *** patients, and in that time he did not receive any personal benefits or rises apart from his salary which was about **** a year. He had many employment offers from hospitals in ***(advance country), but he preferred to help the patients in our country.
- My father was working as the head of **** department in **** between 19** and 20**.
- He spent most of his time helping *** patients, and in that time he did not receive any personal benefits or rises apart from his salary which was about **** a year.
- He had many employment offers from hospitals in ***(advance country), but he preferred to help the patients in our country.
- Now he is ** years old, and retired, his pension will be ** a year.
- My mother was working as *** in a *** school until she retired 5 years ago because of her bad health, and currently she receives only a *** a year.
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My father was working as the head of **** department in **** between 19** and 20**. He spent most of his time helping *** patients, and in that time he did not receive any personal benefits or rises apart from his salary which was about **** a year. He had many employment offers from hospitals in ***(advance country), but he preferred to help the
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I would like to thank nona the brit for correcting my statment.
Does it make sense to any of you, or do I have to improve it in any means (by adding more information, or supporting ideas).
This is to be submitted to a college scholarship organization.
Thank you very much in advanced.
Does it make sense to any of you, or do I have to improve it in any means (by adding more information, or supporting ideas).
This is to be submitted to a college scholarship organization.
Thank you very much in advanced.
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