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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Would you please correct my sentence
I came to Pune in 2004 to join my new office. That was my first visit to Pune. I request to my office guys to suggest me the place near to office where I can stay. They had suggested multiple places. One of the team member offered me to joined with him and rent was 8000/-. I had joined with him. Letter on I had explored the other areas and then released I was in wrong place. There were other good areas near to the office to stay with lesser rent compare to was paying rent on that time.
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My suggestions: I came to Pune in 2004 to join my new office. ) “I asked others in my office for suggestions of places to stay that were near the office. ) “One of the team member s offered to share with him.
- My suggestions: I came to Pune in 2004 to join my new office.
- ) “I asked others in my office for suggestions of places to stay that were near the office.
- ) “One of the team member s offered to share with him.
- ”
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My suggestions:
I came to Pune in 2004 to join my new office. (Perhaps ‘join’ should be ‘visit’?)
“I asked others in my office for suggestions of places to stay that were near the office. They suggested multiple places.” (‘had’ is unnecessary due to the time context.)
“One of the team members offered to share with him. His rent was 8000/-.”
“I accepted and joi
I came to Pune in 2004 to join my new office. (Perhaps ‘join’ should be ‘visit’?)
“I asked others in my office for suggestions of places to stay that were near the office. They suggested multiple places.” (‘had’ is unnecessary due to the time context.)
“One of the team members offered to share with him. His rent was 8000/-.”
“I accepted and joi
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