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Ljswave Posted 14 years ago
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Would you please correct my one sentence of English writing below?

* I don't want to do anything at all because i've gained weight playing, drinking with my friend and sleeping too much for this summer vacation.

i'm not English native speaker. so i don't know how to write naturally,correctly in English . pls help me.
i'm so helpful that you explain why it is wrong. ^^
  

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I don't want to do anything at all because I've gained weight playing and drinking with my friend and sleeping too much over this summer vacation.

— Mister Micawber

  • I don't want to do anything at all because I've gained weight playing and drinking with my friend and sleeping too much over this summer vacation.
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I don't want to do anything at all because I've gained weight playing and drinking with my friend and sleeping too much over this summer vacation.
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thank you very much for ur urgent answer^^
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