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Toto.. Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you please correct my essay..
Hi again ..I need you read my essay and tell me what you think about it..
I spent more than half of my life in school, and I had a lot of teachers. Some of them were really good teachers and I will remember them for all my life. However, some of them I didn’t like so much and they were my nightmare. Mr.Hassan ,my favorite teacher of all , was teaching us English language at Secondary School .He is Saudi from . He is about 40 years old.
He has got a wonderful and strong personality which we , his students, admire and respect.
Truly, Mr. Hassan is a person who can not be forgotten .That due to his great way of treating others. Accordingly, no one had the ability to disobey him whatever he asked us to do. Of course, That was not because he was tough. On the contrary , he was very kind and warm hearted. The reason for that was his wisdom and respect .
Mr.Hassan can be described as a good teacher. He used to give us as much as he can out of his wide knowledge .He has got enough knowledge about the subject he teaches. For instance, he was able to answer any question we asked without using the book. For me , this is the good teacher.
Moreover, Mr.Hassan was very fair . All students are equal for him. I don’t remember that he ever prefer a pupil on the count of another . This was the reason why we all enjoyed good relations among us. But in the same time ,he was able to give every single pupil whatever he deserved according to his efforts .
To conclude, I consider my English teacher, Mr.Hassan , is one of the best teacher I ever met in my life. He was an excellent memorable teacher for all the good characteristics he had.
I spent more than half of my life in school, and I had a lot of teachers. Some of them were really good teachers and I will remember them for all my life. However, some of them I didn’t like so much and they were my nightmare. Mr.Hassan ,my favorite teacher of all , was teaching us English language at Secondary School .He is Saudi from . He is about 40 years old.
He has got a wonderful and strong personality which we , his students, admire and respect.
Truly, Mr. Hassan is a person who can not be forgotten .That due to his great way of treating others. Accordingly, no one had the ability to disobey him whatever he asked us to do. Of course, That was not because he was tough. On the contrary , he was very kind and warm hearted. The reason for that was his wisdom and respect .
Mr.Hassan can be described as a good teacher. He used to give us as much as he can out of his wide knowledge .He has got enough knowledge about the subject he teaches. For instance, he was able to answer any question we asked without using the book. For me , this is the good teacher.
Moreover, Mr.Hassan was very fair . All students are equal for him. I don’t remember that he ever prefer a pupil on the count of another . This was the reason why we all enjoyed good relations among us. But in the same time ,he was able to give every single pupil whatever he deserved according to his efforts .
To conclude, I consider my English teacher, Mr.Hassan , is one of the best teacher I ever met in my life. He was an excellent memorable teacher for all the good characteristics he had.
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You need to be consistent with your tenses. I've highlighted some other issues in red that you need to fix. Toto..
- You need to be consistent with your tenses.
- I've highlighted some other issues in red that you need to fix.
- Toto..
- I spent more than half of my life in school, and I had a lot of teachers.
- Some of them were really good teachers and I will remember them for the rest of my life.
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You need to be consistent with your tenses. I've highlighted some other issues in red that you need to fix.
Toto..
I spent more than half of my life in school, and I had a lot of teachers. Some of them were really good teachers and I will remember them for the rest of my life.However, some of them I didn’t like so much and they were a
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