Would you please correct my email?
Would you please help me? Would you please correct my email? I don't know rabbi X personally and I'll write him for the first time. I'd like to be respectful and polite. Is it correct way to show my respect using the word "dear"? And do you understand my message? Thank you for your help!
Dear Rabbi X,
Peacemakers paid today $6500 to the Bank of England (IBAN GB124345-67890) for the peace camp. There will be in the peace camp five participants from Estonia. Peacemakers paid last year 162,00 €, which is (162x1,1651) $188,75, for the preparations of peacecamp.
Sincerely,
Laura X
Treasure, Peacemakers
Top answer
Your letter is very respectful. It's nice. But you have some words out of order.
- Your letter is very respectful.
- It's nice.
- But you have some words out of order.
- See below for a revision.
- Dear Rabbi X, Peacemakers paid $6500 to the Bank of England (IBAN GB124345-67890) today for the peace camp.
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Your letter is very respectful. It's nice. But you have some words out of order. See below for a revision.
Dear Rabbi X,
Peacemakers paid $6500 to the Bank of England (IBAN GB124345-67890) today for the peace camp. There will be five participants from Estonia in the peace camp. Peacemakers paid 162,00 €, which is (162x1,1651) $188,75 ,last year for the preparations of the peace c
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