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Ljswave Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Would you please correct me natural and grammatically?

I try to make a virtual dialog between a private instructor, John and his director.
John is trying to let his director know that He is going to quik his job at the end of the this month.

Would you please correct me natural and grammatically?
I'd like you to correct for 2 versions, formal and informal.

-----The dialog that I wrote goes:
Eric: : Mr. John,Can I talk to you for a minute? I have something to tell you
John: So, sit down here. What are you going to talk about?
Eric: I'm going to teach until this month.
John: Well, really? What happened?

Eric: There isn't something bad. and no special reason.
          I have been teaching here for about 4 years..I need some rest. I'm going to go abroad ..for traveling or something.
          I need to change something for the better future.
John: hm..I feel bad...well for it ...I think you should do..
             I got it. I will get a teacher for you.

Eric: Thanks you.Bye.
  

Top answer

Eric: : Mr. John, (Eric would address him as "John" (informal) or "Mr. Jones" (formal) ) Can may I talk to you for a minute?

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  • Eric: : Mr.
  • John, (Eric would address him as "John" (informal) or "Mr.
  • Jones" (formal) ) Can may I talk to you for a minute?
  • I have something to tell you John : So, sit down here.
  • Sure, Eric.
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Eric: : Mr. John, (Eric would address him as "John" (informal) or "Mr. Jones" (formal) ) Can may I talk to you for a minute? I have something to tell you
John: So, sit down here. Sure, Eric. Please have a seat. What do are you going want to talk about?
Eric: I'm going to teach until the en
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