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Introduction: City of Phu Du is indeed a great place to live and better place to work. Many people have described Phu Du as a “cute” and idyllic City. However, Town Square of Phu Du is not yet a place where residents can have family activities, business activities, a place to eat, or shop. Attracting residents to come to Town Square to eat and shop is essential. We may have heard the business blame that there not many people know about City Town square, therefore there are not many enough customers to support their businesses. On the other hand, we also heard there are nothing in Town Square complained by the citizens.



Purpose: This project is intended to attract people to come to Town Square of Phu Du. The Phu Du's Jolly Time should be created. Friday Night in Phu Du from 6:00p.m to 9:00p.m where the citizens can come on down and enjoy free live music from local performers. If time allows, classic-car show, women try-out, and summer festival are some examples that help the City to attract people to downtown Powder Springs.


Procedure/Tasks to be performed:

1. Organize a committee and meet twice a month


2. Set Day for an event


3. Call for a meeting with downtown business owners


4. Decide on a date of each month, 3^rd Thursday, and we should call that date, as “It’s Jolly Time!”


5. Discuss where/how to obtain performers for each time


6. Recognize local businesses and schools clubs for participating to support the events


7. Evaluate the effectiveness of the activity and plan for the next.

Costs: The City's budgest as describes below.