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Ljswave Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Would you please correct anything strange in my sentences below?"
Would you please correct anything strange in my sentences below?" or lead them to be better ?
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Finally, I bought a jacket which i had really wanted to get yesterday.
I couldn't wait to wear it right now.
so the next day i put it on as soon as possible
and went to school,library and walked around whereever i want , wearing it.(=with the jacket on) Then after i came back home,
i took it off."
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I made the sentences above to show the difference of nuance among "wear" ,"take it off" and "put it on".
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Finally, I bought a jacket which i had really wanted to get yesterday.
I couldn't wait to wear it right now.
so the next day i put it on as soon as possible
and went to school,library and walked around whereever i want , wearing it.(=with the jacket on) Then after i came back home,
i took it off."
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I made the sentences above to show the difference of nuance among "wear" ,"take it off" and "put it on".
Top answer
Suggestion: Finally, yesterday I bought a jacket that I really wanted to. I couldn't wait to use it so early the next day, and as soon as I was able to, I have put it on and went to School, Library and wherever I wanted, wearing it. Then when I came back home I took it off.
- Suggestion: Finally, yesterday I bought a jacket that I really wanted to.
- I couldn't wait to use it so early the next day, and as soon as I was able to, I have put it on and went to School, Library and wherever I wanted, wearing it.
- Then when I came back home I took it off.
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Suggestion:
Finally, yesterday I bought a jacket that I really wanted to.
I couldn't wait to use it so early the next day, and as soon as I was able to, I have put it on and went to School, Library and wherever I wanted, wearing it. Then when I came back home I took it off.
Finally, yesterday I bought a jacket that I really wanted to.
I couldn't wait to use it so early the next day, and as soon as I was able to, I have put it on and went to School, Library and wherever I wanted, wearing it. Then when I came back home I took it off.
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