Would you please check this sentence for grammar errors
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Would you please check the following sentence for grammar errors:
As this is the first systematic study on the effect of earplugs on the intelligibility of Persian words, it is suggested that a similar study be done under the real conditions found in industrial environments.
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I would just change one preposition, but it it unimportant, and shorten it a tad. As this is the first systematic study of the effect of earplugs on the intelligibility of Persian words, it is suggested that a similar study be done under real conditions in industrial environments.
- I would just change one preposition, but it it unimportant, and shorten it a tad.
- As this is the first systematic study of the effect of earplugs on the intelligibility of Persian words, it is suggested that a similar study be done under real conditions in industrial environments.
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I would just change one preposition, but it it unimportant, and shorten it a tad.
As this is the first systematic study of the effect of earplugs on the intelligibility of Persian words, it is suggested that a similar study be done under real conditions in industrial environments.
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