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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance

Would you please check this passage from my resume

1b00This is a passage from my resume. Please check if I should put the highlithed words instead of the corresponding words (those before the brackets in each word).02b02br
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01b00Professional profile02b02br
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00Should I say: Entrepreneurship minded ( or 01font01b00Entrepreneurially02b02font00 minded01b00 02b00)02br
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00Elaborate (01b01font00Elaboration02font02b00) and update (01b01font00updating02font02b00) integrated schedules (Linkage (01b01font00t02font02b00)Throughout (01b01font00e02font02b00)Engineering, (01b01font00d02font02b00)Delivery, (01b01font00c02font02b00)Construction & (01b01font00c02font02b00)Commissioning with the focus on construction), progress measurement procedures and reports (daily, weekly and monthly). Prepare(01b01font00preparation of02font02b00) project performance & constraints analysis, prepare(01b01font00ing02font02b00) and update(01b01font00ing02font02b00) forms for the monthly payment progress, negotiate(01b01font00ing02font02b00) & incorporate(01b01font00ing02font02b00) client comments as needed, get client approval & issue(01b01font00authorisation of02font02b00) for payment. Prepare(01b01font00preparation02font00)02b00, update(01b01font00updating02font02b00) forms & collaborate in the clearance of punch list at the handover stage of the project.02br
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1b 01font 00Hi,02font 02b 02br 02br 01b 00This is a passage from my resume. 02b 02br 02br 02br 02br 01b 00Summary:02b 02br 02br 00Elaborate (01b 01font 00Elaboration02font 02b 00) and update (01b 01font 00updating02font 02b 00) integrated schedules (Linkage (01b 01font 00t02font 02b 00)Throughout (01b 01font 00e02font 02b 00)Engineering, (01b 01font 00d02font 02b 00)Delivery, (01b 01font 00c02font 02b 00)Construction & (01b 01font 00c02font 02b 00)Commissioning with the focus on construction), progress measurement procedures and reports (daily, weekly and monthly). Prepare(01b 01font 00preparation of02font 02b 00) project performance & constraints analysis, prepare(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) and update(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) forms for the monthly payment progress, negotiate(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) & incorporate(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) client comments as needed, get client approval & issue(01b 01font 00authorisation of02font 02b 00) for payment.

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  • 1b 01font 00Hi,02font 02b 02br 02br 01b 00This is a passage from my resume.
  • 02b 02br 02br 02br 02br 01b 00Summary:02b 02br 02br 00Elaborate (01b 01font 00Elaboration02font 02b 00) and update (01b 01font 00updating02font 02b 00) integrated schedules (Linkage (01b 01font 00t02font 02b 00)Throughout (01b 01font 00e02font 02b 00)Engineering, (01b 01font 00d02font 02b 00)Delivery, (01b 01font 00c02font 02b 00)Construction & (01b 01font 00c02font 02b 00)Commissioning with the focus on construction), progress measurement procedures and reports (daily, weekly and monthly).
  • Prepare(01b 01font 00preparation of02font 02b 00) project performance & constraints analysis, prepare(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) and update(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) forms for the monthly payment progress, negotiate(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) & incorporate(01b 01font 00ing02font 02b 00) client comments as needed, get client approval & issue(01b 01font 00authorisation of02font 02b 00) for payment.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00What is the purpose of this summary?
  • Are you just doing it for an electronic kind of resume, to fit in as many keywords as you can that can be found by an automated computer search?
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1b01font00Hi,02font02b02br
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01b00This is a passage from my resume. Please check if I should put the highlithed words instead of the corresponding words (those before the brackets in each word).02b02br
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0So I need to say: Entrepreneurially minded.02br
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00What if I say: ...., entrepreneurship, ... (in a list of qualities, omitting the word "minded"). 02br
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00Experience summary (What I have done):02br
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01b00Elaborate02b00 and 01b00update02b00 integrated schedules (Linkage Thro
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0Hi again,02br
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01font00So I need to say: Entrepreneurially minded.02font00 Yes02br
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01font00What if I say: ...., entrepreneurship, ... (in a list of qualities, omitting the word "minded"). 02font00It's more dynamic if you list your qualities in the form of ad
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0Thank you very much, I appreciated your comments.02br
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00Makh, London0-
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