Would you please check this for me?

Hi,

Here is some parts of an application letter. Would you please check it for me?

"I am writing to express my interest in applying for Master's degree in "Management Information Technology" in the Institute of Information Systems at the Bern School of Department of Business Administration. I have a bachelor degree in “Medical Record” and because I'm interested in information systems and resources, I would like to continue my study in “Management Information Technology”. I found my interests in this field and done my recent researches in line with Health Information Systems, Health Information Security and quality of electronic services.

I am eager to continue my researches in some attractive fields such as e-Business/online marketing, Virtual work or any field related to the electronic business. I would really appreciate it if you let me know about the prerequisites, programming languages or other skills, for passing this course and for being selected as a graduate student for your future researches and projects. My M.Sc. thesis is on effective factors on estimating of the cost of production software projects. I have published some ISI papers, international patents as well as some papers in national conference.

Thank you!