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USF Posted 11 years ago
Science & IT
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I would be very grateful, if you could check this passage, and correct my errors... I wanted this to be fluent English so if you had any suggestion, it is much appreciated.
In all above cases, we have sensors, which receive physical signals and transform them into digital data, and we have functioning units that by the collected data can perform sets of actions, share them with other machines, or prepare reports. The most common features, among ubiquitous devices are: they are mobile, and in USNs, resources are limited. Mobility, extensive coverage, and availability of these devices are excellent features to output valuable and extensive amount of data, but it has its own limitations:
1. Limited power source
2. Limited calculation speed
3. Cost and bandwidth of wireless connections to transfer raw or processed data
4. Limited storage
5. Privacy and security of data
6. Qualification and Validation of data
I would be very grateful, if you could check this passage, and correct my errors... I wanted this to be fluent English so if you had any suggestion, it is much appreciated.
In all above cases, we have sensors, which receive physical signals and transform them into digital data, and we have functioning units that by the collected data can perform sets of actions, share them with other machines, or prepare reports. The most common features, among ubiquitous devices are: they are mobile, and in USNs, resources are limited. Mobility, extensive coverage, and availability of these devices are excellent features to output valuable and extensive amount of data, but it has its own limitations:
1. Limited power source
2. Limited calculation speed
3. Cost and bandwidth of wireless connections to transfer raw or processed data
4. Limited storage
5. Privacy and security of data
6. Qualification and Validation of data
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This is a bit technical and lacking in context (it does not make complete sense on its own). So my wording may need to be adjusted if I did not understand what you wanted to say. Here are my suggestions: In all the above cases, we have both sensors, which receive physical signals and transform them into digital data, and we have functioning units, which use the collected data to perform sets of actions, share them with other machines, or prepare reports.
- This is a bit technical and lacking in context (it does not make complete sense on its own).
- So my wording may need to be adjusted if I did not understand what you wanted to say.
- Here are my suggestions: In all the above cases, we have both sensors, which receive physical signals and transform them into digital data, and we have functioning units, which use the collected data to perform sets of actions, share them with other machines, or prepare reports.
- The most common features of ubiquitous these devices are that they are mobile, and in USNs [ means??
- Spell out this abbreviation ], and their resources are limited.
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This is a bit technical and lacking in context (it does not make complete sense on its own). So my wording may need to be adjusted if I did not understand what you wanted to say. Here are my suggestions:
In all the above cases, we have both sensors, which receive physical signals and transform them into digital data, and we have functioning units, which us
In all the above cases, we have both sensors, which receive physical signals and transform them into digital data, and we have functioning units, which us
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