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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Would you please check these sentences?

1.Our principal says its relevant to wear neutral dress on a graduation party.2.My father's face was full of anguish when his father passed away.3.For the first time, my father was really amazed of my strong judgement about child custody.4The man said he saw someone stole his money, his allegation is not true, because when the money was stolen, he was out of state.5.Everyone was very dissapointed by his poor judgement about innocent people.6.From my perspective, it wil be very unfair to ignore poor people.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised sentences here. Our principal says its relevant to wear neutral dress on a graduation party.

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please correct them and post your revised sentences here.
  • Our principal says its relevant to wear neutral dress on a graduation party.
  • My father's face was full of anguish when his father passed away.
  • For the first time, my father was really amazed of my strong judgement about child custody.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please correct them and post your revised sentences here.

1.Our principal says its relevant to wear neutral dress on a graduation party.
2.My father's face was full of anguish when his father passed away.
3.For the first time, my father was really amazed of my strong judgement about child custody.

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