0
Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you please check my writing?
Hi, can someone please check my writing? Also, please do let me know if the sentence hanging or any grammatical error in it, so I can rectify my mistake. Which is appropriate to use, caused or leads?
When a poor rubber tapper dreams of becoming rich in a short time period, unfortunately, this caused/leads him to become involved in illegal activities.
When a poor rubber tapper dreams of becoming rich in a short time period, unfortunately, this caused/leads him to become involved in illegal activities.
Top answer
A poor rubber tapper dreams of getting rich quick, but unfortunately, this leads him to become involved in illegal activities.
- A poor rubber tapper dreams of getting rich quick, but unfortunately, this leads him to become involved in illegal activities.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
9 Answers
0
A poor rubber tapper dreams of getting rich quick, but unfortunately, this leads him to become involved in illegal activities.
00
0
How about this, can you spot any mistakes?
Long summary
A poor rubber tapper with a low income, is ambitious to live a luxurious life with his wife and children. He wants to find a way where he can get easy money and become rich in the blink of an eye. This leads to him meeting a stranger who takes him into the illegal world of child smuggling and human trafficking. What happens to hi
Long summary
A poor rubber tapper with a low income, is ambitious to live a luxurious life with his wife and children. He wants to find a way where he can get easy money and become rich in the blink of an eye. This leads to him meeting a stranger who takes him into the illegal world of child smuggling and human trafficking. What happens to hi
00
Jenn123How about this, can you spot any mistakes?Yes: 'poor' = 'with a low income'.
00
I think this much better:
A poor rubber tapper is ambitious to live a luxurious life with his wife and childrens. He wants to find a way where he can get easy money and become rich in the blink of an eye. This leads to him meeting a stranger who takes him into the illegal world of child smuggling and human trafficking. What happens to him after he choos
A poor rubber tapper is ambitious to live a luxurious life with his wife and childrens. He wants to find a way where he can get easy money and become rich in the blink of an eye. This leads to him meeting a stranger who takes him into the illegal world of child smuggling and human trafficking. What happens to him after he choos
00
0
Noted. I made a silly mistake, I'm sorry. What about the rest, is it okay?
00
No.
A poor rubber tapper is ambitious to live in luxury with his wife and children. He wants to find a way to make easy money and become rich in the blink of an eye. He meets a stranger who takes him into the illegal world of child smuggling and human trafficking. What happens to him after he chooses to follow this shortcut to wealth?
A poor rubber tapper is ambitious to live in luxury with his wife and children. He wants to find a way to make easy money and become rich in the blink of an eye. He meets a stranger who takes him into the illegal world of child smuggling and human trafficking. What happens to him after he chooses to follow this shortcut to wealth?
00
Related Questions