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A Good Family

A family has three main points,father,mother, and the children.The three parts must do their best to make the home atmosphere warm and friendly. They all have duties against each other and should behave in a particular moral way towards each other.

   The first and foremost essential part could be father. He has the most power in a family, and his decisions can determine the main style of life in a family. He could influence the children to behave in a deserving way.The father can appear as a pattern to all the other family members.

   However, a family without a good mother seems not to be fat as a fiddle! A mother can play a substantial role in almost all situations in the family. She could lead or mislead her children to the desired destiny. Since the father has to be outside most of the time, his wife gets more chance to be with the children and teach them what she thinks is right. Children, especially at the early ages, see their mother as the best teacher, even the given lessons are wicked indeed.

    On the other side, children are the inevitable part of every family and have their own special sweetness and bitterness.They learn the way of life and build up their personality first from inside the family and then the outside. There is no guarantee that children change their tune in an immoral way ending up in a disaster If they are not supervised and warned carefully about what type of dangers threaten them outside the home.

    It is clear as a bell that a good family has to keep every part of itself good. If any part fails, the other parts are not going to survive easily.