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Hi. Would you please check my writing?
"Have you ever thought what the life around you would have looked like if you had never been born? If so, you are in a good company.There is already a movie which renders this portrait of life perfectly, It's a Wonderful Life, directed by Frank Capra.
The story is about a man named George Bailey, who is facing bankruptcy and expecting imprisonment. He regrets his past and how brilliant his life would have been if he hadn't had to provide for his family and sacrifice his own dreams. He regards a suicide as the only way to comfort himself. Meanwhile, a guardian angel comes to him and fulfills his wish of not being born at all! Next, the guardian angel accompanies George to see what life looks like without him.
In the next scene George sees his embittered and bored mother struggling with everyday life. His wife doesn't have a better situation either. Eventually, He ends up in a graveyard to learn that his little brother would have died if he hadn't been alive to save him.
George realizes how crucial his life is to those of others around him. In this movie we comprehend vividly how the life would have been different if we hadn't been born at all. It's a must to see."
"Have you ever thought what the life around you would have looked like if you had never been born? If so, you are in a good company.There is already a movie which renders this portrait of life perfectly, It's a Wonderful Life, directed by Frank Capra.
The story is about a man named George Bailey, who is facing bankruptcy and expecting imprisonment. He regrets his past and how brilliant his life would have been if he hadn't had to provide for his family and sacrifice his own dreams. He regards a suicide as the only way to comfort himself. Meanwhile, a guardian angel comes to him and fulfills his wish of not being born at all! Next, the guardian angel accompanies George to see what life looks like without him.
In the next scene George sees his embittered and bored mother struggling with everyday life. His wife doesn't have a better situation either. Eventually, He ends up in a graveyard to learn that his little brother would have died if he hadn't been alive to save him.
George realizes how crucial his life is to those of others around him. In this movie we comprehend vividly how the life would have been different if we hadn't been born at all. It's a must to see."
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"Have you ever thought what the life around you would have looked like if you had never been born? If so, you are in a good company. ) There is already a movie which renders this portrait of life perfectly, " It's a Wonderful Life, " directed by Frank Capra.
- "Have you ever thought what the life around you would have looked like if you had never been born?
- If so, you are in a good company.
- ) There is already a movie which renders this portrait of life perfectly, " It's a Wonderful Life, " directed by Frank Capra.
- The story is about a man named George Bailey, who is facing bankruptcy and expecting imprisonment.
- He regrets his past and muses about how brilliant his life would have been if he hadn't had to provide for his family and sacrifice his own dreams.
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"Have you ever thought what the life around you would have looked like if you had never been born? If so, you are in a good company.("in good company" is the idiom.) There is already a movie which renders this portrait of life perfectly, "It's a Wonderful Life," directed by Frank Capra.
The story is about a man named George Bailey, who is facing bankruptcy
The story is about a man named George Bailey, who is facing bankruptcy
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