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Persian Learner Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Would you please check my sentences?
Hi.
He is a Christian and very intolerant of other religions, so he will not convert to Buddhism.
He is a Christian and is very intolerant of other religions, so he will not change over to Buddhism.
He is a Christian, and he is very intolerant of other religions, so he will not change his faith.
Are all OK grammatically and in terms of vocabulary?
THX in advance.
He is a Christian and very intolerant of other religions, so he will not convert to Buddhism.
He is a Christian and is very intolerant of other religions, so he will not change over to Buddhism.
He is a Christian, and he is very intolerant of other religions, so he will not change his faith.
Are all OK grammatically and in terms of vocabulary?
THX in advance.
Top answer
The first sentence is not correct because there isn't parallel structure in it. "And" is used to connect a noun with an adjective ("Christian" to "intolerant"). The second sentence is an improvement, and it is acceptable, but the third sentence is the best.
- The first sentence is not correct because there isn't parallel structure in it.
- "And" is used to connect a noun with an adjective ("Christian" to "intolerant").
- The second sentence is an improvement, and it is acceptable, but the third sentence is the best.
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The first sentence is not correct because there isn't parallel structure in it. "And" is used to connect a noun with an adjective ("Christian" to "intolerant"). The second sentence is an improvement, and it is acceptable, but the third sentence is the best.
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