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Compare and Contrast Living in Your City and Living in another City

Many people have to leave their cities to other cities for some reasons. Although they find many similarities in the new environment, there are also some differences that they have to cope with. The most significant of these similarities and differences will be discussed in the following.

To begin with, the fact that every city has its own accent or even a specific language may be the main cause of the difference. For example, I have been to most of the cities in Iran and have found out that they all have a specific accent, though the official language has been Persian. Therefore, the feeling of homesickness had been stronger when I was among people who didn't not speak like me. The situation even gets worse if a different language is spoken in the target city. For instance, in some border cities of Iran there are people who have never been to school to learn the official language and just speak in their own native language. It is probably true to say that language and accent are the most important aspects when one goes to another city.

Another difference between two cities that should be considered is contributed to the weather. Iran is a vast country with different climates in different areas. It is not strange at all that at times people in the south of Iran use umbrella to escape sun rays and some people in the north use umbrellas to escape the rain. It is not so easy for someone who is used to warm weather to live in a cold climate. Therefore, weather can always be regarded as an important difference when living in another city.

Nevertheless, moving to a different city of the same country can be dealt with more easily because of the same culture dominated in the country. I usually don’t have much difficulty to learn the customs and traditions of the city I move to in Iran, because I have already learned most of them in the texts books during school days or on television. In addition, the culture has created a unique lifestyle for most of the people in Iran. For example, they almost have the same way of greetings, the same moral values, and the same way of life generally. For example, if someone is going to marry another one in a different city, he already knows the customs of the marriage and wedding. This unique culture has somehow let all of the people have a better and easier relationship with each other among different cities.

In conclusion, living in a different city from my own city will not be much different if I ignore some differences in language and accent, and if I be aware of the climate of the target city; because there is a unique culture dominated in most of the cities of Iran which paves the way to getting used to the new environment of the different city.
  

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My second try: Many people have to leave their cities for other cities for some reasons. Although they find some similarities in the new environment, there are also some differences that they have to cope with. The most significant of these similarities and differences will be discussed in the following.

  • My second try: Many people have to leave their cities for other cities for some reasons.
  • Although they find some similarities in the new environment, there are also some differences that they have to cope with.
  • The most significant of these similarities and differences will be discussed in the following.
  • To begin with, the fact that every city has its own accent or even a specific language may be the main cause of the difference.
  • For example, I have been to most of the cities in Iran and have found out that they all have a specific accent, though the official language has been Persian.
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My second try:

Many people have to leave their cities for other cities for some reasons. Although they find some similarities in the new environment, there are also some differences that they have to cope with. The most significant of these similarities and differences will be discussed in the following.

To begin with, the fact that every city has its own accent or even

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