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Ljswave Posted 12 years ago
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Would you please check it out ?
I'm writing a form of visa application on online.
I was wondering if my answer is suitable for it.
Would you please check out the answer of two question ?
------The application form goes like:
Purpose of stayMain purpose of stay:
* Main purpose of stay:
- Tourism/Visit family or friends
* List all reasons for visiting Australia
· - Tourism -Religious event r
##Question1. Give details of any significant dates on which the applicant needs to be in Australia
Answer:
I'd like to visit Sydney, Australia from date Month, 2014 to date Month 2014 for seminars that will be held at Sydney in Australia.
Question: Give details of how the stay in Australia will be funded.
Answer:
- Self funded
##Question2.What funds will the applicant have available to support their stay in Australia?
Answer:
I'm going to use the bank accounts for my stay in Australia.
There are about $ amounts in my bank accounts for this traveling.
I was wondering if my answer is suitable for it.
Would you please check out the answer of two question ?
------The application form goes like:
Purpose of stayMain purpose of stay:
* Main purpose of stay:
- Tourism/Visit family or friends
* List all reasons for visiting Australia
· - Tourism -Religious event r
##Question1. Give details of any significant dates on which the applicant needs to be in Australia
Answer:
I'd like to visit Sydney, Australia from date Month, 2014 to date Month 2014 for seminars that will be held at Sydney in Australia.
Question: Give details of how the stay in Australia will be funded.
Answer:
- Self funded
##Question2.What funds will the applicant have available to support their stay in Australia?
Answer:
I'm going to use the bank accounts for my stay in Australia.
There are about $ amounts in my bank accounts for this traveling.
Top answer
For Q2 I'd say:- I will be using personal savings to support my stay while in Australia. I have $$$ in my account for this purpose. Hope this helps.
- For Q2 I'd say:- I will be using personal savings to support my stay while in Australia.
- I have $$$ in my account for this purpose.
- Hope this helps.
- katrina
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For Q2
I'd say:-
I will be using personal savings to support my stay while in Australia. I have $$$ in my account for this purpose.
Hope this helps.
katrina
I'd say:-
I will be using personal savings to support my stay while in Australia. I have $$$ in my account for this purpose.
Hope this helps.
katrina
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Are you visiting family? Are you there as a tourist? Are you there for a religious event? Are you there to attend seminars?
You say all of those things. It creates a unclear picture.
You say all of those things. It creates a unclear picture.
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"It creates a unclear picture ??" - What does it mean?
For more details, I am visiting there as a tourist and for Seminars in my religion and asceticism.
For more details, I am visiting there as a tourist and for Seminars in my religion and asceticism.
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You listed four things that were your purpose. The first thing you said was "Tourism/visit family or friends" - then you said it for a religions reason, then you said it was for seminars. Those different messages are conflicting.
If you said "Visit family and friends, spend a holiday with family, in time for a holiday visit with family" that would be a single message, and a clear picture.
If you said "Visit family and friends, spend a holiday with family, in time for a holiday visit with family" that would be a single message, and a clear picture.
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BarbaraPAYou listed four things that were your purpose. The first thing you said was "Tourism/visit family or friends" - then you said it for a religions reason, then you said it was for seminars. Those different messages are conflicting.Hello, BarbaraPA .
Thank you for your answers.
I'm sorry for copying and pasting where the sentencens of the applic
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I see! I didn't realize they were choices on a drop-down menu and grouped the way they are. That makes all the difference.
Do they allow full-year visas?
Do they allow full-year visas?
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