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Ashley is my classmate. Her full name is Ashley Gonzalez. She is twenty four years old. She lives with her two sisters at Quebec. She has parents and two younger sisters. They all goes to school. Ashley's purpose is to became a psychologist. She has four best personalities that I inspire me alot. In below, I am going describe them all.
Firstable, Ashley is very friendly. She loves to make friends. At the first time when we met, I was walking in a hallway. She come over to me and said hello with an smily face. After having little conversation we come to know we are in same class. So, it's getting more interesting. Day by day we become more closer. She sits next to me in the class. Sometimes if anyone of us having trouble with classwork/homework, we both try our best to solve the problem. We often spend time together whever we get free time. Now, we become such a good friends.
Secondable, my classmate is a responsible person. She takes care of her parents and her three little sisters. As her parents are retired and they don't live in Canada. She always sends money for them. Also, take all responsibilities that necessary for her three sisters.
Thirdable, my classmateis hard-working. She works six days in a week. Everyday she woke up at 6:00 in the morning and drop off her sisters to their school. Then she studies and make lunch before going to work. After she comes back to work, she leaves for her class. At night, she eats dinner with her sisters and discuss about their day.
Further more, my classmate is very grateful. she never gives her more importance than others and feel bad for doing everything. Infact, she feels proud for having an opportunity to prove herself. She believes she will succeed.
To sum up, my classmate is a friendly, responsible and hard-working person. Therefore, I love her and I am proud to have a classmate like her. Ended, I wish God shower blessings on her forever.
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